My Fractured Fairy Tale

We were learning to write an interesting narrative story for an audience.We decided to write a fractured fairy tale.First we learnt about the structure of  a narrative , then we compered the fairy tales.

After that we chose a fairy tale to make change our version of Three Little Bears.

I think I did well with introducing the characters.

One thing I need to work on is keeping some things the same.

My next step is to use more detail.